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Raining Hot Ecstasy by ~hikaru-kun:iconhikaru-kun:



Raining Hot Ecstasy
by Hikaru Merquise


You've teased me
To the point
I don't wanna return
I'm aroused due to you

Wearing your perfume
Your sexy red lingerie
Your constant touching
Of spots unknown only to you

In the rain
We seemed so heated
To be embraced in
That love-lock for long

Ride me long
As I play with your soft breasts
Make me moan
While you work me right

Don't let go
As we change positions
Don't want to
Lose and stop

Moan out loud
Everytime I stroke hard
Tell me how
You want it done

Steam shoots off
Your back when
Raindrops hit
And you scream my name

I am your slave
I will please my mistress well
To the point when
I'll do her neverfail

Orgasmic screams
Escape our lips
Passion held
In the centre of our hearts

Feel your curves
As we hold each other
Tightly through the ride
Of high sexual pride

Kiss me when
Our orgasmism's done
But once again
The fun's never done...
©2002-2009 ~hikaru-kun
:iconhikaru-kun:

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:iconberrylicious46d:
In the words of grandma Klump *I GOT MY OWNSELF HOT TELLING THAT STORY* I love that poem very erotic very sensual......It's like I'm part of this poem and I can feel every emotion.
:iconftwdesigns:
it's very bland. basic. almost childish in it's descriptions. you have better stuff but this... is dissapointing
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UFO i am the king of outer space
Skull and Crossbones Black Rose Beer before Liquor; will get you sicker Black Rose Skull and Crossbones
:iconhikaru-kun:
I agree with ftw..it is uninspired...almost too simple.....well, to remedy this, anybody got any Nytol?
:iconcushlamochree:
FREAKYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! OOOOOOOOOOO i'm telling on you!! HA HA but for real it's cool, but see if you can go deeper...it's erotic poetry let yourself go!!
:iconwakasashe:
nice, but there's room for dept. While this is really good, The other erotics had a stronger quality.
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**No day but today**
:iconsuperskunk:
this rocks !!!!!!

it's like some kinda porno poem.

hahahahah
very very nice.l.....

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