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Cosmic Dreams of Eternity
by Hikaru Merquise


Drift away little dream
Bring me visions of harmony
Appreciated by many
Adored by the masses

Powdery clouds lift
From the heavens
Bring forth glittering images
Of hope and serenity

In a little bundle
Of pure joy and happiness
For all to enjoy
For all to see

Like deja vu
It comes again
First a dream
Maybe reality now

The child Kahalya
Miraculously brought to our arms
As a gift to us all
To cherish and hold nevermore

Precious as the heaviest
Piece of gold found
The child of my dreams
Will one day exist

I feel your heartbeat
I hear your cries
But the time will come
When I can wipe away the tears

To hold you closely to
My yearnful heart
To give you the love
Your parents can only offer

I cry right now
Because you are so close to me
I can hear you
But can't comfort your soul

After those few lone years
Pass us all by
Your spectacular birth will be
The next amazing thing in our lives...^_^
©2002-2009 ~hikaru-kun
:iconhikaru-kun:

Author's Comments

This one takes almost the same path as Nu Rhythm II, but it goes a little deeper into my feelings...:) (Smile)

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what lovely words and thoughts for the child not yet born....
:iconberrylicious46d:
She'll appreciate that Very much
:icongeobyte:
Those were gorgeous words there, Hikaru...
:iconkodama:
Mmm.. very dream-like. I love it =) (Smile)
:iconluci-fer:
I'd say "awww" but it's wholly inappropriate considering the depth of your feeling expressed in this poem. Lovely :) (Smile)

-Luci

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